Intrigue...

I think it is too simple. There are soooo meny rose pictures in the world and this is just another in the bunch. I would also crop it so the dead flower would not be there. It really kills it, haveing a pretty flower next to a fallen dood. Plus the shot is blurry, makeing it a headache when you look at it. And you should have taken it in the early morning. That way there is dew on the flowers. That giveing you a higher impact, technique, and vision. So better luck next time, I hope you don't need it.